kats family hair revised

[daddyalfie]

I very much appreciate all of your critique of my client' site earlier in the "beginner's" forum.

 

I believe I may have responded to all of your points.

 

Would you be kind enough to shoot bullets at my newest "take" on this site?

 

http://w ww.katsfamilyhair.com (Space among the w's deliberate. Remove it!)

 

Looking forward to your comments!

 

Alfie

[Andrea]

* Walk-ins Welcome.

* We are a Full Service Salon

* We Have the Best Stylists, to Care of You ---- take out the comma

* We are a Kid Friendly Salon

* We Have Games for the Kids, so You Can Get Your Service in Peace and Quiet ---- how about '..enjoy our care ....'

* We Cater to Our Clients and Treat Them Like Family

* We Use the Best Products and Our Prices are Reasonable

* We also Do Mini Facials, Manicures and Pedicures --- comma after manicures

* Over 60 years Combined Experience -capitalize Years

* In NC for over six years-- Better? Over Six Years in North Carolina

 

Click on this link for inormation on CONTINUING EDUCATION Courses for Hair Stylists offered by this salon.

We Look Forward to Seeing You. It is Your Hair, Treat it Well! Give it the Best, That's us....

 

Put an 'f' in inormation - and drop the 'click on link for' ---- and be consistent with the first letter caps:

 

Information on CONTINUING EDUCATION COURSES for Hair Stylists Offered by this Salon.

We Look Forward to Seeing You. It is Your Hair, Treat it Well! Give it the Best, That's Us....

 

and maybe some photos of kids / younger clients also.

 

There is still an

 

in your code - and I don't see the purpose of the in your footer division.

[jlhaslip]

I would drop the "We Do", "We Use" stuff and emphasis the Feature as follows:

* Walk-ins Welcome.

* Full Service Salon

* Best Stylists, to Care FOR You

* Kid Friendly Salon

* Games for the Kids, Get Your Service in Peace and Quiet

* Our Clients are Treated Like Family

* Best Products and Reasonable Prices

* Mini Facials, Manicures and Pedicures

* Over 60 years Combined Experience

* In NC for over six years

[JBall]

I like the footer being red and the smaller text. The rounded corners don't really fit nor do they add anything to the over all design. I think a soft wrapper shadow along both sides and the original header would fit great with your "Plain Vanilla" approach, add in Thelma and jlhaslip's suggestions and call it done.

 

Just a foot note: I love the idea of Plain Vanilla Designs. I think that could be a real niche for you. I think realistically you could come up with two or three simple, yet classy designs and sell them over and over and over.

Edited February 9, 2009 by JBall

[youngros]

May be it is a personal preference thing, but I hate Times New Roman. It was designed for printed stuff, and I still don't like it, much prefer Arial. Maybe use a sans serif font, verdana was designed for screen use and there are others out there.