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Which prom ticket looks better?

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Yes sir, but I was wrong to much angle on the hearts. Also get rid of the mask or whatever you used on the hearts for they are all red. You forgot to make the gold a little darker like LSW said.

 

Make the font on listen.. a little larger for it takes up, I don't know like maybe 90% of the space between the hearts.

 

Then maybe not so much a larger font size maybe just like 3 more px.Then adjust the tracking to make the letters a little farther apart, That is the AV with the two sided arrow underneath the AV. If the stroke on the date is 2px make it 1px. Make the, I think it is the glow on listen.. just enough to separate it from the background.

 

To tell you the truth now without all the background clutter I like it just the way it is. The one before you rotated the hearts. Just move the hearts in a little bit to five a little more white space on the edge.

 

Just had an idea you could make a smaller heart in the middle and curve the listen.. text a little bit more and put the text listen to on top and your heart on the bottom.

 

I see you are reading this right now I have to leave be back in a couple of hours.

 

If you want send me a copy of the psd file for i can play with it. You can get my e-mail in my profile.

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I think i might just go with the 2 straight hearts with out the sparkle on top. I think i will leave the background clean. I am not sure how to make just that part darker and not make the silver less.

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I also flipped the heart horizontal on the right because it looked like both hearts were pointing to the right instead of them pointing to center.

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Okay final question. If you were just a staff member with virtually no other design knowledge besides the female instinct because it seems like all of them have the design sense with a few exceptions, which one would you pick?

 

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Well I like what you did with the text in the top one. I pick that one. But here is the kicker my wife picked the bottom one, go figure.

 

The bottom will print better. :D

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The bad thing is i printed them both out at school and the top one seemed to print better, just used more ink though... It might be because the gold or something. it just seems blurry when printing the second one. Especially the words Listen to your heart

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I belive the reason that for the blurry text on the second one is the bevel.

 

I down loaded your psd but I can not load upload it where i got it from. I am sending you a pm

 

I will be working into the night and i will keep checking to see if you responded.

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Here is new image without the insect / box. :D

 

2heartdis.jpg

 

What do you think?

It will be printed on cardstock if i win.

 

I think it's better then others.I like also it.Thanks

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No new post in a couple of days... did you get a final design yet Benjamin?

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